Wo hooo
Not bad. Nice man. I agree with you, alot of people just repeating/remaking other beats. You did a nice job on a fresh original beat. The drums were ok. What you should do tho, is take the piano beat, and clone it, add another instrument to play the same beat, and take over from a certain point. Cause its a catchy tune, but the piano just barely makes it in the scene. Use like a sort of synth. The deep bass/synth was alil too loud, try to smooth it out. Im a fan of the violin instrument. its my fav instrument. And you put it to good use. The ending of the song was perfect, ending with a piano never fails.
Over all man, its AWESOME. Keep up the good work. Drop by my page sometime. Hope to see more of this. And possibly a fixed version. =) I like it man.