Amazing
The melodies were tite bro. Effect thing at 35 seconds or so was awesome.
Okay the fixes you should do:
1. That effect goes on alittle too long. It kinda kills the song. That should be used later in the song, for a bridge, as in terms of writers and performers. Because the beginning should be all singing etc. Then the breakdown should be later on. Though later when it kicks in again, that was good, that is what Im talking about.
2. Though the melody was really good. A few of the instruments sounded weird.
Either it just didnt sound right, or it needs replacement. The main organ sounds alright, it could use a lilttle more compress or something. Perhaps, lower it too. The synth sounds too cheesy, it sounds like sytrus. Try replacing it with something else. Or another trick that works is, copy the synth into another synth, play them both, jus lower the other synth a little lower. So instead of one synth sound, it'll play 2, which will give it a better sound depending on what you pick.
Can't think of anything other then lowering some other things.
All really legit though man. None of these are biggies. Keep it up dude.
5/5 10/10
-OxyJin